Hey,
this is the first and pretty 724ish/864ish poetry that came up after a 30 min effort from my side
do give me tips to help improve it to atleast chartered bus type
sab hain mere pass par phir jaane kyon aisa lagta hain
is barsaat main mann bheega bheega lagta hain
khush hun main par phir bhi yeh ghumaan hota hain
sooraj bhi aaj bheega bheega sa lagta hain
~care
1 comment:
ghazal likh daalo sirji......seems a good start in that direction.....
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